Awake!
As dawn descends
Into the night
Look!
As she tames the beast
With fire in her eyes
Anguish in her words
And A desire to kill…
Poison lips
Serpents kiss
Slowly
Softly
Watch!
As she unleashes
Soft
Sweet
Death upon him
She is the devil in you…
Me love black rose!
As dawn descends
Into the night
Look!
As she tames the beast
With fire in her eyes
Anguish in her words
And A desire to kill…
Poison lips
Serpents kiss
Slowly
Softly
Watch!
As she unleashes
Soft
Sweet
Death upon him
She is the devil in you…
Me love black rose!
10 comments:
That is a very stupid poem you wrote. What are you in grade two or something.
hahahahaha.... may be..
thanks for the comment...
cheers! \m/....
I don't think it's stupid at all (slapping Mark about the head), it's kinda' deep and soulful, so there!
;-)
\m/...
LAAMMEEEEE
and gay!! get a girlfrien yo bitch
lol... thank you.. but atleast less gayer than being anonymous about your views... :)
Thanks for stopping by... and commenting... tc... cheers! \m/..
I actually like it quite a bit. It must be leaving people with big impressions if they can't leave without saying something.
- JustaHousebear
@ Crystal... thats a nice compliment... thanks for stopping by and commenting... and gald to know you liked it..
thank you and TC.
Cheers!
Ignore the people who don't understand the difference between criticism and insults. Particularly anonymous ones.
I like it, it really gets feelings stirred up, clearly everybody has an opinion, even if a couple of them are idiotic.
Keep up the good work.
@ Captain... Thanks again for your kind words... i agree with you.. please do keep in touch.. \m/...
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