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Sunday, November 9, 2008

BLACK ROSE


Into the Garden of Eden
Moon light falls
Mist all around
In darkness she thrives
Me love
Black rose

A radiant glow
An aura surrounds her
The mystic wind blow
Spreads her scent
Diabolically sweet
Me love
Black rose

Her eyes
A gateway
To her soul
As deep as the black hole
A vortex
That sucks me in
Pacifies my demons
Freedom from all sins
Me love
Black rose

The baying hounds
Honor her coming
The howling sound
The darkness around
As black as the night sky
Her hair as moor
Her curse
Her world
She rules
Me love
Black rose

The darkness in me
The darkness in her
Collide and become one
The night gets colder
The night gets darker
On this confluence of two dark souls
Thoughts get clearer
Visions un-blur
A new world of our own
Me love
Black rose

4 comments:

Astraeus said...

nice
broken lines and stanzas.. discord..
reminded me of minnie bruce pratt structurally

Dr.Paranoid said...

@ Astraeus...
Thank you sir...
will take that as a huge compliment.

\m/..

Dream3er said...

hawwwwwwww !! tht waS jus AWESOME

Dr.Paranoid said...

thank u.... ;-)